Reaction and feedback from your focus group?
For the front cover my focus group found the background picture as well as the magazine name very eye catching and attractive. And the structure and explanation of what the magazine contains was organised, especially the interview and the fact that I placed a quote made it look good and gives the reader an interest.
Their criticisms of the front cover would be the consistent usage of the same font and style, this may work in a newspaper but a magazine would require more of a range of fonts and colours to make it stand out. Also the colours used for the text in the front cover clash with the colours of the background picture which makes it hard to read clearly.
As for the contents page, they liked how I structured the pictures with the page numbers this makes the reader not only know what the particular page is about but also a taster of who its about with a picture or portrait of that particular artist or person. Their criticisms would be that there was a few empty spaces in the contents page which makes it look unprofessional; maybe I should include a few more pictures which are music related such as instruments to make the magazine have more of a variety. Furthermore maybe a few advertisements to be included with the magazine would have helped.
My layout for the interview page was structured very nicely in their opinion. The description of the artist “tu stun” and his self portrait on the side were eye catching and made them want to read the whole interview. On the other hand, there was too much textual information, especially if the magazine is aimed at younger viewers. Also the quotation in a different colour and font and in large was a good one to choose, people would look at it and think this is worth reading.
Over all they liked the magazine and would pay for it.